Argh.

Jan. 23rd, 2006 03:02 pm
jenn_unplugged: (Resistance is futile)
[personal profile] jenn_unplugged
I despise reading over copy-edited text, because I invariably disagree with the choices the copy-editor made regarding punctuation. Here are two examples from the first page of my chapter:

"Mathematics educators and mathematicians have recently begun to reconsider the university mathematics preparation of teachers, paying careful attention to the development of knowledge of mathematics for teaching; an understanding of the underlying processes and structures of concepts, relationships between different areas of mathematics, and knowledge of students' ways of thinking and mathematical backgrounds."

They replaced the colon I put there with that red semi-colon, but that doesn't make sense because the text after the semi-colon cannot stand on its own. That text is intended to be a definition of the term "knowledge of mathematics for teaching". WTF?

Here's another: "It may be that carefully guided experiences in novel and unfamiliar contexts such as those afforded by elementary number theory, can help pre-service teachers develop a more sophisticated mathematical perspective, as well as a deeper understanding of the mathematics they will be teaching."

The red comma was added, which makes no sense. It either needs to be deleted or a matching comma should be added at the beginning of the "marked off" text, after the word "contexts".

It makes me look like a bad writer when they insist on using incorrect punctuation, you know?

*headdesk*

ETA: I just noticed that the header on the odd pages reads "11. RIVISITING ALGEBRA" instead of Revisiting Algebra. OMG, who are these people?

ETA 2: On the other hand, I wrote crap like this: "When the class was working on a problem, about half of the students were typically listening intently, offering suggestions, while the other half, bent over their notebooks and calculators, worked on the problem on their own." *winces* Comma happy, Jenn?

Date: 2006-01-23 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abbycadabra.livejournal.com
On the other hand, I wrote crap like this: "When the class was working on a problem, about half of the students were typically listening intently, offering suggestions, while the other half, bent over their notebooks and calculators, worked on the problem on their own." *winces*

Bah! I read this, and I was like, "What's wrong with that?" I will never learn!

As for all the other copy editing drama, I wouldn't stress too badly about how your grammar skillz come off. Nine out of ten people STILL don't know how to properly use a semi-colon. They are the least important of the puncuation family, and Papa Period should have done us all a favor and left the semi-colon out in the cold as soon as he laid eyes on it.

Date: 2006-01-24 04:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jenn-unplugged.livejournal.com
Oh, man -- I just read that sentence and cringe! :-P

And yeah, you're right. No one will notice but me, probably. But still...

Date: 2006-04-13 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookboy.livejournal.com
I read your post with a great deal of sympathy. Nobody is pickier about symbols than a mathematician. (My colleagues have me down as the guy who insists on the space between a number and an SI unit.)

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